Thursday, July 10, 2008

An Impossible Dream!

There is an impossible dream that I chase,
Which makes people think I’m in an immature phase.
Although I don’t trust their definition of impossible,
But I know for sure ‘tis not practical and feasible.

There are so many burdens, adding to the heap,
Experiences, I must say, don’t come for cheap,
“Me too! Me too!”, more and more demands scream,
When they know- I’m designing my dream.

It’s not about money, luxuries or fame,
Oh! Please, don’t give me that blame.
I’m not materialistic and don’t desire this shabbiness,
I’m a perfectionist, who just dreams of ‘Perfect Happiness’.

[Composed by Me (“Nidhi Bagdia”) on 6th July, 2008 (06.07.08) ]


  1. Great Poem. Dunno who's better. You, Your Experience with life or your creativity. Anywayz u can thanks me for all of them. :)

  2. I do Thank YOU very very sincerely from the bottom of my Heart :)

  3. Hmmm.. it is an intresting start to poem wirting thing. But do remember poem are not about following rhyming schemes, poems are abuot economy of words. Lesser the words the better is the poem... And try to create images of your idea..

    If you intrested, i'll show you some of my work.

  4. Spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings... Wordsworth was right :)

  5. Dat's one powerful compliment! Thank You!! :)

  6. rhyming poetry needs creativity.....its not so easy...u ve gud creativity...keep goin... words are simple but powerful:)

  7. Thanks for the compliments buddy... i'll try and keep going on and on and on :)

  8. Ur words really speak .An Amazing Work....keep exploring ur life....keep exploring ur dreams....

  9. Thanks... To tell honestly, this poem is really close to my heart... I'm glad u like it too... Will keep exploring :)